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Thursday, 2 November 2017

Sleepover -by Marc Final

Learning Intention:Write a recount using adjectives, and write in paragraph form.


Success.Criteria:I know am successful when I can write in paragraphs of the same idea and use adjectives correctly.

Last Friday I went for a  sleepover in my friends house, Mark. I brought my I-Pad pro, Samsung 8, Sleeping bag, Soccer ball,Watch, P.J and my green skate board.

First, Marks dad asked us if we wanted any snacks and drinks but I said"No thanks''.Then me and Mark sat on the couch and talked about school.He told me he is the top of the class at writing.Next we talked about our favourite sport and food.

Secondly, we went outside and played soccer. I was the goalie because I like  to block the goal.Mark was the striker because he loves to score a goal .We played the whole day.

Afterwards,  we went inside and had some dinner.We ate delicious roast potatoes and roast chicken.I put  ketchup and chilli sauce on my food.It was so yummy.We also had a desert of yummy Ice cream.

Lastly, we watched a movie called the Lego Ninjago. I like the white ninja and Mark liked the black ninja.The white ninja is called Zane,he is the ninja of ice and he is a robot.The black ninja is called Cole,he is the ninja of earth.

Finally, the movie was finished and we went to sleep.

Sunday, 3 September 2017

Watching television makes us clever -by Marc

Learning.Intention-We are learning to write a persuasive writing.
Success.Criteria:I am successful when I can persuade people to agree to my writing.

I think watching television doesn't make you clever.

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Watching television will make you dumb because the people you watch might be crazy.Television can make your eyes hurt and blury. You could get blind!

Watching violent movies are really bad for children because they could follow the violence. Some movies are scary that the children could get night mares so they can't sleep.Children might like television too much they will get addicted, they will not go to school because they are tired. 

Wednesday, 23 August 2017

Should people cut down trees?- by Marc

Learning.Intention-We are learning how to write a persuasive writing.
Success.Criteria: I am successful when I can persuade people to agree to my argument.


I think people should not cut down trees.
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Image result for Tree pictureTrees are very special because they are God's creation.Trees gave us oxygen to breathe. Smart people can make medicine from trees for the sick people. People can get honey from the bees honeycomb that hangs on the branches of trees.

Some fresh healthy fruits can be picked up in some trees.Animals and insects live on trees like bees,wasps, birds and squirrels.
The roots of the trees protect small fishes from being eaten by big fish.Trees are fun to climb on.

Trees are amazing and  helpful plants.