Tuesday 28 March 2017
Sunday 26 March 2017
Thursday 23 March 2017
Friday 17 March 2017
Grandpas -by Marc
L.I-W.A.L.T: Write a recount.
Success Criteria: I know I can do this when I can write a recount and use capital letters and full stops correctly.
One lovely Saturday afternoon we had nothing to do at home. So Grandpa and I planned to go fishing.I took my jacket and my fishing rod.We had not much fishing supplies so we went to the fishing supplies shop first.I got some cheap squid for bait while Grandpa bought some hooks, food and a net for prawns.
We arrived at the fishing place at the city.There were boats, heaps of rocks and a wobbly bridge.We picked up a spot so grandpa can organise the rods.While I was waiting I got some rocks and I threw them on the water and counted how many times it bounces. I went to catch some prawns with the net.The only way to catch prawns is to scrape the sides of the log that hold the platform with a net.
When the rods were ready I grabbed it excitedly. I didn't catch anything but when I went at the end of the platform, I caught lots of fish. Then I went to see my Grandpa and I was surprised that he caught lots of fish than me.
Lastly, I challenged my grandpa to catch the biggest fish.We had a timer for 30 mins.I went farther than where I was before.My Grandpa was still fishing at the same place but a little bit farther.When the time was up we measured our fish my but Grandpa caught the biggest fish. I threw my fish back in the water because we had enough fish.
Finally we went home and we cleaned them. We cooked them and we ate it.
Success Criteria: I know I can do this when I can write a recount and use capital letters and full stops correctly.
One lovely Saturday afternoon we had nothing to do at home. So Grandpa and I planned to go fishing.I took my jacket and my fishing rod.We had not much fishing supplies so we went to the fishing supplies shop first.I got some cheap squid for bait while Grandpa bought some hooks, food and a net for prawns.
We arrived at the fishing place at the city.There were boats, heaps of rocks and a wobbly bridge.We picked up a spot so grandpa can organise the rods.While I was waiting I got some rocks and I threw them on the water and counted how many times it bounces. I went to catch some prawns with the net.The only way to catch prawns is to scrape the sides of the log that hold the platform with a net.
When the rods were ready I grabbed it excitedly. I didn't catch anything but when I went at the end of the platform, I caught lots of fish. Then I went to see my Grandpa and I was surprised that he caught lots of fish than me.
Lastly, I challenged my grandpa to catch the biggest fish.We had a timer for 30 mins.I went farther than where I was before.My Grandpa was still fishing at the same place but a little bit farther.When the time was up we measured our fish my but Grandpa caught the biggest fish. I threw my fish back in the water because we had enough fish.
Finally we went home and we cleaned them. We cooked them and we ate it.
Sunday 12 March 2017
Ash Wednesday -by Marc
L.I.W.A.L.T-Write a recount.
Success.Criteria:I know I can do this when I can write a story about Ash Wednesday in order and use capital letters and full stops correctly.
On Ash Wednesday the whole school went to the church to give up our favourite treasure drawings.We stood outside waiting for father.We were joined by the kindergarten children.First we listened to father Andrews' talk why we gave up our favourites on Ash Wednesday.Then he burned all the drawings.
After that the whole school went inside the church.We sang a song and make the sign of the cross. Father read us a story from the bible.Lastly father got the ashes and everyone stood up to have the sign of the the cross of ashes on our forehead. Ms Bullot helped him because there are lots of people.
Finally the church finished and we sang our last song then we left.
Success.Criteria:I know I can do this when I can write a story about Ash Wednesday in order and use capital letters and full stops correctly.
On Ash Wednesday the whole school went to the church to give up our favourite treasure drawings.We stood outside waiting for father.We were joined by the kindergarten children.First we listened to father Andrews' talk why we gave up our favourites on Ash Wednesday.Then he burned all the drawings.
After that the whole school went inside the church.We sang a song and make the sign of the cross. Father read us a story from the bible.Lastly father got the ashes and everyone stood up to have the sign of the the cross of ashes on our forehead. Ms Bullot helped him because there are lots of people.
Finally the church finished and we sang our last song then we left.
Wednesday 1 March 2017
The Day I saved Emily- by Marc
Learning Intention- W.A.L.T- Write a recount.
Her mom was screaming crazy and she was shouting for help. I dashed in the water and started to swim.I managed to pull her out. When Emily was out I gave her a towel. She went home and her mom came back and said "Thanks a lot".
Success Criteria: I know I can do this when I write my story in order and use capital letters and full stops correctly.
Last Thursday I went fishing all by myself. Emily also sat near a river and started to fish. She caught one but the strong fish pulled her in the water.The water was freezing.She could not swim and the water was deep.
Her mom was screaming crazy and she was shouting for help. I dashed in the water and started to swim.I managed to pull her out. When Emily was out I gave her a towel. She went home and her mom came back and said "Thanks a lot".
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