Success Criteria: I know I can do this when I write my story in order and use capital letters and full stops correctly.
Last Thursday I went fishing all by myself. Emily also sat near a river and started to fish. She caught one but the strong fish pulled her in the water.The water was freezing.She could not swim and the water was deep.
Her mom was screaming crazy and she was shouting for help. I dashed in the water and started to swim.I managed to pull her out. When Emily was out I gave her a towel. She went home and her mom came back and said "Thanks a lot".
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