Watching television makes us clever -by Marc

Learning.Intention-We are learning to write a persuasive writing.

Success.Criteria:I am successful when I can persuade people to agree to my writing.

I think watching television doesn't make you clever.

Watching television will make you dumb because the people you watch might be crazy.Television can make your eyes hurt and blury. You could get blind!

Watching violent movies are really bad for children because they could follow the violence. Some movies are scary that the children could get night mares so they can't sleep.Children might like television too much they will get addicted, they will not go to school because they are tired.