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Thursday, 2 November 2017

Sleepover -by Marc Final

Learning Intention:Write a recount using adjectives, and write in paragraph form.


Success.Criteria:I know am successful when I can write in paragraphs of the same idea and use adjectives correctly.

Last Friday I went for a  sleepover in my friends house, Mark. I brought my I-Pad pro, Samsung 8, Sleeping bag, Soccer ball,Watch, P.J and my green skate board.

First, Marks dad asked us if we wanted any snacks and drinks but I said"No thanks''.Then me and Mark sat on the couch and talked about school.He told me he is the top of the class at writing.Next we talked about our favourite sport and food.

Secondly, we went outside and played soccer. I was the goalie because I like  to block the goal.Mark was the striker because he loves to score a goal .We played the whole day.

Afterwards,  we went inside and had some dinner.We ate delicious roast potatoes and roast chicken.I put  ketchup and chilli sauce on my food.It was so yummy.We also had a desert of yummy Ice cream.

Lastly, we watched a movie called the Lego Ninjago. I like the white ninja and Mark liked the black ninja.The white ninja is called Zane,he is the ninja of ice and he is a robot.The black ninja is called Cole,he is the ninja of earth.

Finally, the movie was finished and we went to sleep.

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